new synopsis 1

this is my first attempt at a new synopsis, it isn't bad but its not straight to the point so i need to cut it down again.

Synopsis

Mary and Clive have been childhood friends all there lives, and are now starting college. Marry gets a boyfriend called Mark, but what she didn't know is Clive is in love with her. Clive tries to break Mary and Mark up. Mary finds out and never wants to see Clive again. Clive goes mad and invites her over to apologise one night. She goes over to Clive’s house and he locks her in the house. She wakes up tied to a chair. He tells her about His love for her and how if he cant have her no one can. He plans to kill them both. But her hero her Mark, sneaks in through the back window hits Clive over the head and knocks him out, and rescues marry. Clive goes to jail and Mark and Mary can be together.