Friday, 16 April 2010
final synosis
Synopsis “To Be Or Not To Be”
Mary and Clive have been childhood friends all their lives, and now are starting college. Mary get a boyfriend called Mark, but what she didn't realise is that Clive is in love with her. Clive tries to break Mary and Clive up. Mary finds out and never wants to see Clive again. Clive becomes jealousy crazed and invites Mary over to apologise one night. She goes over to Clive’s house and he locks her in the house. She wakes up tied to a chair. He tells her about his love for her and how if he cant have her no one can. he plans to kill them both. But her hero Mark, sneaks in through the back window, hits Clive over the head and knocks him out; and rescues Mary. Clive goes to jail and Mark and Mary can be together.
Mary and Clive have been childhood friends all their lives, and now are starting college. Mary get a boyfriend called Mark, but what she didn't realise is that Clive is in love with her. Clive tries to break Mary and Clive up. Mary finds out and never wants to see Clive again. Clive becomes jealousy crazed and invites Mary over to apologise one night. She goes over to Clive’s house and he locks her in the house. She wakes up tied to a chair. He tells her about his love for her and how if he cant have her no one can. he plans to kill them both. But her hero Mark, sneaks in through the back window, hits Clive over the head and knocks him out; and rescues Mary. Clive goes to jail and Mark and Mary can be together.
new synopsis 1
this is my first attempt at a new synopsis, it isn't bad but its not straight to the point so i need to cut it down again.
Synopsis
Mary and Clive have been childhood friends all there lives, and are now starting college. Marry gets a boyfriend called Mark, but what she didn't know is Clive is in love with her. Clive tries to break Mary and Mark up. Mary finds out and never wants to see Clive again. Clive goes mad and invites her over to apologise one night. She goes over to Clive’s house and he locks her in the house. She wakes up tied to a chair. He tells her about His love for her and how if he cant have her no one can. He plans to kill them both. But her hero her Mark, sneaks in through the back window hits Clive over the head and knocks him out, and rescues marry. Clive goes to jail and Mark and Mary can be together.
Synopsis
Mary and Clive have been childhood friends all there lives, and are now starting college. Marry gets a boyfriend called Mark, but what she didn't know is Clive is in love with her. Clive tries to break Mary and Mark up. Mary finds out and never wants to see Clive again. Clive goes mad and invites her over to apologise one night. She goes over to Clive’s house and he locks her in the house. She wakes up tied to a chair. He tells her about His love for her and how if he cant have her no one can. He plans to kill them both. But her hero her Mark, sneaks in through the back window hits Clive over the head and knocks him out, and rescues marry. Clive goes to jail and Mark and Mary can be together.
my original synopsis
this was my original synopsis with my partner before he left.
Synopsis
Kat is a popular girl in school. A new boy called Josh is introduced into her class, he didn't talk and somehow she finds him interesting and wants to get to know him.
She tries to talk to him but he’s not interested so her and her friends follow him one night after school. Her friends leave her after so long and she finds herself alone in a grave yard with him.
She finds out that he is a vampire and it is his job to bring the other vampires food, he hates this. She wants to be apart of his world as she has fallen in love with him.
She takes over his job and proves herself. And he falls in love with her. They live forever together.
i found this was to long and complicated, perhaps not realistic. which is why i decided to start again.
Synopsis
Kat is a popular girl in school. A new boy called Josh is introduced into her class, he didn't talk and somehow she finds him interesting and wants to get to know him.
She tries to talk to him but he’s not interested so her and her friends follow him one night after school. Her friends leave her after so long and she finds herself alone in a grave yard with him.
She finds out that he is a vampire and it is his job to bring the other vampires food, he hates this. She wants to be apart of his world as she has fallen in love with him.
She takes over his job and proves herself. And he falls in love with her. They live forever together.
i found this was to long and complicated, perhaps not realistic. which is why i decided to start again.
film planing
today i made a start on writing my new storey, I'm fining it hard to get a good ending, and which genre to follow. at the moment it needs cutting down to become a synopisis isted of a full storey.
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